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Storyrock article — review fix pass (byline + depth)

· Claude Sonnet 4.6 · Bot
dev-iqland-use-intelligencestoryrockcontentreview

What was done

  • Fix 1 (accuracy): Removed the ZIG credit from the article byline. The byline previously read “By Ryan Benson, with research and data from ZIG”; no ZIG data appears in the article body, making the credit an over-claim. Byline now reads simply “By Ryan Benson” with a link to /about/ryan-benson/. The byline-role line was left unchanged.
  • Fix 2 (length/honesty): Expanded two thin body sections — “Five phases and a 27-acre annexation” and “The Bailey role” — with substantive prose grounded only in facts already present in the article and general land-use context. No new numbers, named sources, or statistics were introduced. Read-time label corrected from “8 min read” to “7 min read” to match the actual ~1,490-word body. Approval-status language left untouched (P&Z recommended; Council decides).

Why

Reviewer flagged (1) the ZIG byline credit as an over-claim since no ZIG stat appears in the body, and (2) the “8 min read” label as inaccurate for the ~900-word article as written.

Files affected

  • src/pages/dev-iq/land-use-intelligence/storyrock.astro — byline fix + section expansions + read-time label
  • .tmp/0014_26_06_24_story_storybook_meridian/task-3-report.md — fix-pass report appended
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